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Fiction

Partial eclipse

Novel roiled by plot

The Thinning by Inga Simpson

by Joseph Steinberg
January–February 2025, no. 472

The Thinning by Inga Simpson

Hachette, $32.99 pb, 279 pp

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Inga Simpson’s The Thinning owes a literary debt to the American nature writer Annie Dillard’s evergreen essay ‘Total Eclipse’ (1982). An account of the solar eclipse that Dillard observed on 26 February 1979, ‘Total Eclipse’ aims not merely to narrate experience but also to impart the shock of estrangement. It is an essay in awe, shot through with verbal echoes. In the moon’s long shadow, Dillard glimpsed an otherworld in which the hillside’s ‘hues were metallic; their finish was matte’, in which the living appeared as if preserved within ‘a tinted photograph from which the tints had faded’. When perfectly aligned, the moon and sun come to resemble a ‘thin ring, an old, thin silver wedding band, an old, worn ring’: a partial eclipse’s relation to a total eclipse is the relation of ‘kissing a man’ to ‘marrying him’. What Dillard knew well, and what her sentences know best of all, is that there is a patness to causal narrative that impedes the expression of a genuine revelation. No amount of careful set-up can quite account for the new.

 


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The Thinning by Inga Simpson

Hachette, $32.99 pb, 279 pp

ABR receives a commission on items purchased through this link. All ABR reviews are fully independent.


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Comments

Jane Munro
Saturday, 22 February 2025 11:18
The book is, at the same time, simplistic and confusing. It seems to have been written to a formula, perhaps a style taught in courses on creative writing. This includes ‘relatable’ minutiae of daily life, and alternating synchronous and flashbacks in an effort to keep the reader’s attention and build empathy for the narrator. Aspects of Australian nature awareness are not bad. And the presentation of a world towards which we could be conceivably heading are credible. Unless I misunderstood the ending, it appears that the internet-based police state is destroyed when the satellites are brought down. I wonder whether that is what happens, as the story can be, as mentioned above, confusing.

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